Pipeline Surf Point

in this paragraph is there any mechanical errors(grammar,spelling, caps,commas,…) or awkward sounding sentences? if so what and can you help me fix it?
Miscellaneous hand-held electronics
There are so many uses for miscellaneous hand-held electronics such as PDAs, Mp3 players and digital cameras. The PDA is a pocket notebook that has various programs used by many people. One can do whatever the tasks are by using the pocket Microsoft word, surfing the internet and checking/sending email although the PDA is one electronic. The Mp3 player is a digital song player and it is one of the smallest audio file types made. This small electronic is used because they’re very portable, easy to use and can store many albums and songs. Like many other electronics, the digital camera is reviewed to be very useful to all people in there every day life. The most immediate advantage to having a digital camera is the instant replay; one can see what you’ve got in seconds and can shoot again if necessary. All of these small hand-help electronic devises are used all over America and in several different homes and offices.

im playing Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Darkness and my piplup says he wont learn surf. what’s going on? according to the book he can learn it.

OhK…
So I need a nickname for a final project that I need to do for English III.
I would greatly appreciate some help from a couple of people, if that wouldn’t be too much of a bother. I have a list of information about me below…maybe that would help…
My name is Samantha Strickland. I am 17 years old. I am Hawaiian. I play the guitar and sing. I also LOVE watersports. I am REALLY into surfing!!! I go to East High School and I am also the school mascot…”The Cavalier”. I play basketbal, soccer, and I pole vault. I also take great pride in being the only one at East High School that can do the Audio Visual work! PLEASE HELP!! thanks!

i have a program called Jet Audio as my media player on vista (as i do not like windows media player). however every time i open an mp3 and jet audio goes to start, vista says ‘this program needs your permission to continue’. it is just so annoying. i wish there was something i could tick so that vista would remember my answer for next time.
i surfed google for a solution & tried right clicking the program in c:program files and ticking ‘run as administrator’, but it doesnt help, as i still always get the nag.
i also tried turning of Vista’s ‘User Account Control (UAC)’ but then i started to get ‘windows security centre’ alerts warning me that UAC was turned off. they were almost as annoying too. i have the option to turn of the security centre alerts, but then my computer would be vulnerable if my internet security programs failed and i wasn’t then alerted by windows.
anyone have any good ideas? am i missing something, lol ?
p.s in ‘user accounts’ in control panel, its says im an administrator

I am really focusing on DELL but i might also be considering an HP.
I am looking for a laptop:
Great Speakers For Music (About 250 songs, Hard Drive isn’t so Important)
Burning Music
Watching Online videos
Playing Games on the internet
Surfing the internet (Speed)
Word Documents
PowerPoint Presentations
Technical Support
Battery Life
These are the most important things in an approximate order.
I am looking at 3 DELL computers and 1 HP.
Here they are:
HP:http://www.futureshop.ca/catalog/proddet…
PRICE: 799$
DELL Inspiron 15:
Intel® Core™ 2 Duo T6600 (2.20GHz/800Mhz FSB/2MB cache)
Glossy, widescreen 15.6 inch display (1366×768)
4GB Shared Dual Channel DDR2 at 800MHz
160GB SATA Hard Drive (5400RPM)
Intel Graphics Media Accelerator X4500HD
8X CD / DVD Burner (Dual Layer DVD+/-R Drive)
9-cell battery
Dell Wireless 1515 802.11 Wireless-N Mini-card
Sound-blaster X-Fi Hi Def Audio
PRICE: 859$
DELL Studio 15
Intel® Core™ 2 Duo T6400 (2.0GHz/800Mhz FSB/2MB cache)
15.6” High Definition (720p) LED Display with True-Life™
2.0 MP Webcam
3GB Shared Dual Channel DDR2 at 800MHz
Size: 250GB SATA Hard Drive (5400RPM)
Intel Graphics Media Accelerator 4500MHD
8X Slot Load Super Multi (DL DVD+/-R Drive + RAM support)
Dell 1510 Wireless-N Card
56 Whr Lithium Ion Battery (6 cell)
Creative Sound Blaster X-Fi MB
PRICE: 869$
DELL Studio 17
Intel® Pentium® Dual Core T4200 (2.0GHz/800Mhz FSB/1MB cache)
Glossy widescreen 17.0 inch display (1440×900)
3GB Shared Dual Channel DDR2 at 800MHz
Size: 250GB SATA Hard Drive (5400RPM)
Intel Graphics Media Accelerator 4500MHD
8X Slot Load CD / DVD Burner (Dual Layer DVD+/-R Drive)
Integrated 2.0M Pixel Webcam
Dell Wireless 1510 802.11 n half mini-card
56 Whr Lithium Ion Battery (6 cell)
Sound-blaster X-Fi Hi Def Audio
PRICE: 859$
Sorry For the length and I DON’T want a MAC
Thank-You