Help Please With Grammar?
Monday, January 25th, 2010 at 10:52 am
in this paragraph is there any mechanical errors(grammar,spelling, caps,commas,…) or awkward sounding sentences? if so what and can you help me fix it?
Miscellaneous hand-held electronics
There are so many uses for miscellaneous hand-held electronics such as PDAs, Mp3 players and digital cameras. The PDA is a pocket notebook that has various programs used by many people. One can do whatever the tasks are by using the pocket Microsoft word, surfing the internet and checking/sending email although the PDA is one electronic. The Mp3 player is a digital song player and it is one of the smallest audio file types made. This small electronic is used because they’re very portable, easy to use and can store many albums and songs. Like many other electronics, the digital camera is reviewed to be very useful to all people in there every day life. The most immediate advantage to having a digital camera is the instant replay; one can see what you’ve got in seconds and can shoot again if necessary. All of these small hand-help electronic devises are used all over America and in several different homes and offices.
Category: Audio Surf
January 25th, 2010 at 2:06 pm
I find whenever I try and help on pieces like this, I can never send it, so I will be short and hope you understand
‘One can carry out various tasks by using’ Delete ‘from ‘although’ to ‘electronic’ ‘player for Mp3 one of the smallest’ ‘this small player is used because it is very portable’ ‘like many other pieces of electronic equipment the digital camera is considered to be very useful to all sorts of people in their everyday life.’ ‘advantage in having a digital camera is its instant replay’ ‘hand-held electronic devices’